Thursday, 5 February 2015

Voiceover and Dialogue

For the ransom scene filmed in the drama studio we have decided on a ransom script for the child to read:

 

'Mum, It's me,
Don't worry, It's fine,
I'm okay.
I've been taken by these men,
Please help, help me.'


After feedback, we changed the script to increase tension, removing "don't worry I'm fine", and putting in "I'm scared", and making her beg for help:

'Mum, It's me,
Please help, I've been taken. 
I'm scared,
They want your money,
Please help, help me.'





The other dialogue we have in our trailer is a radio broadcast, reporting the kidnapping of Esther: