'Mum, It's me,
Don't worry, It's fine,
I'm okay.
I've been taken by these men,
Please help, help me.'
Originally this script worked very well as we were planning on zooming backwards from the girls face, so the watcher sees more and more of her kidnapped state, so tension builds, as the tension builds in the script.
However as we changed our idea to just a change of focus we have altered the script to this:
Mum, It's me,
Please help, I've been taken.
I'm scared,
They want your money,
Please help, help me.
